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Petals unfold
Out from the heart
Ready to shine
And have a new start

The new day approaches
With all that’s in store
The flower opens
And asks for more

The breeze whispers
And birds call
The trees shudder
And old leaves fall

Face to the sun
The flower smiles
Basking in the warmth
If only for a while
It was kind of quick, not really all that thought out, but :iconyuuki2008: gave me the idea to write about flowers and this is what I came up with, so I hope it's liked.
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Awwww, this is so cute~ :aww:
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zerosilver Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
You're welcome. ^^
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cherrichan13 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is great! I love it. A great idea. :D
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zerosilver Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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cherrichan13 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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Yuuki2008 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
amazing writing
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zerosilver Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! And thank you for faving it too! ^^
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Yuuki2008 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
welcome
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Darkangel1567 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Wow it's really really good^^.
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